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The Mysterious Missing Mister Enter - Chapter 2

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November 10, 12:32
Allen Gregory's Complex – Dining Room.

“What a fool!” Shouted the kid as he pound his hand against the table in a rapid fashion. “How DARE he make a mockery of me!”
“What is going on?” Entered his father. Or at least one of his fathers. He was a nice looking man with a hair colour similar to his son's.
“This man here!” Allen Gregory shouted, pointing to the laptop he had on his table. “Look what he said about me!”
He played a video titled “Animated Atrocities #19: '1 Night in Gottlieb'”. His father watched. He was more so confused about all that was being said. More so he admitted that Mr. Enter was right on all of the things he said. Including the critiques on his own son. Though he spoke not. His eyes shifted and his face turned into a nervous smile. Allen Gregory gave him an eye cold stare.
“Yes, that is enough internet for you.” His father said, shutting the laptop down and closing it. He took it and soon left. Allen Gregory grind his teeth and his eyes squint.
“That is it!” He shouted. “I need some help from someone...” He rubbed his chin. A second later, his eyes dilated and he let off a grin. He got up and saw his other dad's purse. He reached his hand in to fish out a cellphone. He picked it up and searched for numbers through countless websites, not caring they did not have an Unlimited Data plan. “Aha!”
He dialled the number soon after. At least they had free minutes since it was a sunday.
“Are you Mr. Czars Sueve? I have an offer you can't possibly refuse.”

November 10, 5:55.
Allen Gregory's Complex – Dining Room.

Allen Gregory sat on the end of the long table. He made sure everyone was away before consulting with this Czars, a man who was cloaked from head to toe, the same cloaked man that threatened Minty.
“So you want me to murder someone?” Czars asked. “In what way?”
“Anything will do.” Allen Gregory said. “But I want this to be interesting. How about a deal.”
“A deal? What kind?”
“You see, I don't want to capture Mr. Enter directly. I want him to suffer. So here is where my deal comes in.”
“I'm all ears.” Czars nodded.
“You grab whoever and whatever you want for this job. But I will be in control for most of it.” Allen Gregory offered.
“Wait! That means I would barely have any power!” Called out Czars, pounding his fist against the table. “If you want to kill him, then why hire me? To be your pawn?”
“Exactly. And I know how to get you to co-operate.” Allen Gregory sneered. Czars paused and stared at him. “I can always reveal who you really are. Just like Rumpelstiltskin, if one says your true name, you become powerless.”
“H-how do you know this?” Flinched Czars.
“Your anagram really isn't hiding anything. Now get to it! I know the perfect place to meet up. And I want this all to happen next Saturday. So go get whoever and meet me at this location.”
Allen Gregory took out of his pocket a slip and gave it to Czars. The cloaked man read it over a few times. He already knew the perfect candidates.

November 10, 8:23PM.
Ponyville – Ponyville Plaza.

The mint colored mare was walking down the plaza humming a tune to herself. She had a bag in her mouth with yarn of various colors, knitting needles, and a book. She was smiling and looked up. The moon almost lit up the town and the stars twinkled before her. She knew it, it was a perfect night to work more on her hobby. That was to make socks. Soon enough, she found her cottage and opened its door. She put the bag down by a couch and panted.
“Phew, that bag was heavy!” She laughed to herself. It was dark in her house, given since she was away from home most of the day. She took out a match and lit up some candles. She sighed in pure bliss afterwards and laid on her couch.
Later on, she worked on her knitting. The windows opened suddenly and the wind blew out the candles. Minty shrieked and stopped her activities.
“Oh my! Strong winds!” Minty cried as she made her way to the window. She closed it and took another match to relight the candles. As soon as she lit it, she turned. Czars was right behind her. Minty shrieked loudly and fell back.
“Wh-who are you?” Minty shuttered. Czars didn't say anything. He took out his hand and touched the ground. It only took a few seconds for the once happy and bustling town of Ponyvile to be deserted and and destroyed. Minty gasped. She didn't know what to do. She backed off and ran outside her own house. The skies went from clear and starry to cloudy within an instant.
As she ran, she saw the bridge that went over a simple creek. On it were three ponies. A pink one, a blue one, and a purple one. And they all had their backs turned.
“Pinkie Pie! Rainbow Dash! Wysteria! Thank goodness you're all okay.” Minty cried out. “We have to go, there-”
“Minty.” Pinkie Pie called but in a less cheery voice.
“We were expecting you, Darling.” Rainbow Dash coldly added.
“You should have stayed inside.” Wysteria finished. All three turned at the same time towards her. Their eyes were blank and their teeth were bared. Minty backed off more with her ears down.
“Y-you aren't my friends!” Minty cried.
“You've always been so stupid.” Pinkie Pie added. “We are your friends.”
“No!” Minty cringed and fell to the ground. She covered her head with her hooves.
“Oh yes, Minty. Come with us and we will escape our destruction.” Pinkie offered a hoof out.
“I refuse!” Minty cried out. Pinkie went closer and closer until Minty finally stood up. She turned around as if to walk away. But then she raised her back hooves and kicked Pinkie Pie in the chest. The pink G3 pony flew back and right into the other two ponies. Minty ran, mentally sorry she hurt her friend. She was close to home but Czars was blocking her door. Minty tried to run back but other ponies who had the same expression as Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Wysteria surrounded her. Minty was panicking.
“We have you surrounded, pony.” Czars added. Behind her, Rainbow Dash knocks her out by hitting her hooves against the mint pony's neck. Minty fell unconscious.

November 11, 12:52AM
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Minty awoken. Her vision was blurred and her neck hurt.
“What a horrible nightmare...” Minty murmured. She gasped and her eyes grew intense. She noticed that she was in a cage in a dark room. Around her was the cloaked man and Allen Gregory. They shot daggers with their eyes at her. Minty backed down.
“You brought a pony?” Allen Gregory scuffed in disbelief. “I give you freedom to bring an army and you brought a pony? What is she going to do, giggle Mr. Enter to death?”
“No. She has the sense of direction we need.” Czars explains.
“Hah! Sense of direction? Did I hire the right evil being?” Allen Gregory scowled.
“Listen. Back in her G3 days, she had no sense of direction. That seems to have evolved along with her entire being. She can tell me where this location is.”
Czars slipped a piece of paper through the bars. It had Mr. Enter's address written on it. Minty knew the location already. Well, sort of. She didn't know where she was at but had an idea where the location of the city itself was. Minty then had an idea.
“I dunno! I mean I have a terrible sense of direction, hehe.” She smiled and giggled. This was an act however. “You must have the wrong pony. I mean, I once lost a map in my sock drawer! How's that for silly?”
“Don't play dumb!” Shouted Allen Gregory. He kicked the cage. Minty stumbled and fell. “Now tell us where to find Mr. Enter!”
“Well... I don't even know where I am at.” Minty said. “How can I tell you that?”
“She has a point.” Czars admitted. “I'll take her outside.”

November 11, 1:05 PM.
Desert – Farmhouse.

“Now you have a good idea where your surroundings are, here is the map.” Czars lay flat a map of the entire state on the ground. He pointed their current location. Minty was confused.
“There is no desert here according to this map.... and yet we are in one.” Minty pointed out. “How can that be?”
“You are smarter than you let on, pony.” Czars added. “The desert mysteriously came here only a day ago.”
“You did this, didn't you...? Just like how you destroyed Ponyville.”
Czars didn't answer.
“Did you find it?”
“Right here...” Minty pointed. She was real quiet.
“Good. When that day comes, you will be the one who delivers him. We will torture you until you break. Now back in the cage you go!”
Minty slowly followed him back.
“I wish I knew what to do...” Minty whispered to herself.
Chapter 2 for :iconmrenter:

Now we know a little more about how this all happened. And more about that deal.

I am working on Chapter 3 and it might be released Monday. Can't say for sure.

Disclaimers.
I do not own any of these characters.
Mr. Enter and his video series belongs to :iconmrenter:
Allen Gregory and his father belong to Fox
Minty and other ponies belong to My Little Pony and Hasbro
Czars Sueve belongs to... someone.

Enjoy! ^_^

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Listen, it dosen't take a Genius to Realize Czars Sueve is actually Mr. Enter's Pet Dog.